Audience Feedback Evaluation

For this task I had to put together a focus group, my focus group were 3 teenagers aged 17 and 18 as they are the target audience for this band. Below is their reactions to the initial screening...

• Good Shots and Framing
• Lip Sync in time although the punch at the start is slightly off
• Lighting is too dark on some shots
• The juxtaposition of the moving and tripod shots doesn't work
• Use of text is good but needs to be more thought out
• Good Introduction
• Editing needs to punch more in time to the music
• Needs to be more rebellious & edgy
• Use more angles from the band performance location